User talk:Pjiman1

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Happy editing, Evan Seeds ( talk )( contrib. ) 06:52, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Straight ally
Hi Pjiman1. Welcome to Wikipedia, thank you for your edits to the above article. It is with regret that I must inform you that I've reverted your addition. The content you added was not very well written; it's read like an essay. Please also note that the information must comply with Neutral point of view policy, phrases like "Allies are invaluable assets in the struggle ...." do not (see also Avoid peacock terms for a list of some words that should be avoided.) The paragraph beginning with "There are many ways to become an ally..." does not contain encyclopedic information, and read like an advertisement. I dearly hope you are not discouraged from editing, and I suggest you work on this article at one of your subpages, like User:Pjiman1/Sandbox, for example. Feel free to contact me if you need assistance; I do not have much expertise on the subject (disclaimer, that is), but if you can provide reputable sources for the material, I'll help you rewrite it to conform to Wikipedia policies. :) Best regards, - PeaceNT (talk) 13:49, 22 January 2008 (UTC)