User talk:Pjowen57

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Simpson Owen (November 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 17:31, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 27)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

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Sulfurboy (talk) 21:35, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Simpson Owen has been accepted
 John Simpson Owen, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Espresso Addict (talk) 03:03, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
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 * Hello Pjowen57 -- A belated welcome to Wikipedia! I have accepted your draft above as the subject's notability appears clear, however more sources (and more inline citations to them) would be very helpful. Books, magazine articles, academic journals, national newspapers and the like are ideal; they need not be available online. I note in particular that "His most lasting achievement was transforming a small laboratory into the world-renowned Serengeti Scientific Research Institute" is supported by a source that appears to fail to mention Owen.
 * I note that you share a surname with the subject; if you are related then you must declare this conflict of interest. See the instructions at Conflict of interest for details. Good luck! Espresso Addict (talk) 03:21, 17 May 2018 (UTC)