User talk:Pkpe222/Avoidance coping

The opening paragraph is well-explained. There are good references to support the Avoidance coping topic.I wish there is articles or journals that study on symptoms of Avoidance coping to explain on symptoms section. It was very interesting to read a Alzheimer's Disease section. I would love to see more supportive articles on that section. Overall, i was enjoying reading on your writing about Avoidance coping.suejung89 (talk) 15:00, 19 April 2012.

There are so grammatical errors such as repeating words in the opening paragraph. The headings should be bolded like a normal wikipedia page and how to change the font is listed on the cheat sheet posted on black board. Your references should be all listed down at the bottom instead of as websites in the middle of paragraphs. You provide several good examples of where someone would need to use avoidance coping. Perhaps you should create links to the Alzheimer's wikipedia page or any of the other disorders in case someone was not sure what they are. Overall you have a very good start on the subject, just be sure to expand on each idea. Jaclyn turpin (talk) 15:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)Jaclyn turpinJaclyn turpin (talk) 15:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)