User talk:PlanetAri/sandbox/Susan McKenna-Lawlor

Hi, here are some thoughts about your sandbox:
 * Just part of the Wikipedia style guide, but citations directly follow punctuation, including commas, periods, and semicolons (Sentence.[1] not Sentence[1]. or Sentence. [1]) I see a couple instances to fix—you can just drag and drop the references to move them where they need to go.
 * Make sure you add references to the section "Awards, fellowships, and honors"
 * You should consider adding more references in general to the article Susan McKenna-Lawlor. In general, all content on Wikipedia should be referenced. If consecutive sentences come from the same source, the citation can be added once at the end of the consecutive sentences rather than duplicated at the end of each sentence. In that vein, no paragraph should end without a citation, and no paragraphs should lack citations. I see several paragraphs that lack citations, which is a red flag. Where does this content come from? How will the reader know it's verifiable?

It's a small addition, but it's a fine one. I think the article overall will benefit from adding more citations to reliable sources! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:57, 2 June 2020 (UTC)