User talk:Planetarysprotege/sandbox

Ammar
Great work, add a conclusion to the topic. add couple more hyperlinks for example: ,Magellan (spacecraft), Ridge, SAR images, Graben, Cross-cutting relationships, Lithosphere, Magma, and repeat your existing hyperlinks when the word is repeated.

Organized, easy to read work. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AmmarBanafea (talk • contribs) 23:43, 3 March 2015 (UTC)

Feedback by Adam
Good work! The layout is good and is easy to read. One thing I would think about adding would be a closing section perhaps to link things together more or something like that.

=Andrew= Good, concise, and easy to follow page. Maybe add some images for the different models (the page for magmatic underplating has a good image you could use). Other than that, there are a couple grammatical errors.

Reword this sentence in the intro:
 * Its geologic feature significance of crustal plateau serves as a place to hold the localized tessera terrains in the planet, which makes up roughly 8% of Venus' surface area.

Grammatical errors:
 * The distribution was then mapped to find its temporal and spatial relation to find insight into the Regio's deformation and formation mechanisms.


 * Folds and a distinct compositional layering generally describe the western part of Ovda Regio.

Awebb6 (talk) 09:29, 3 March 2015 (UTC)