User talk:Plantdad737

Desiree Lim
Minor Revisions Needed TA3301 (talk) 15:35, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Well written and with good sources!
 * Restructure the Early Life and Education and Inspiration sections as single paragraphs instead of points
 * Do not bold the Filmography section header and italicize all the films listed

feedback
Hi I know your course is over, so I'm not sure if you're still around and interested in editing. However, I wanted to let you know that I saw that Enclave: The Ottawa Women's Monument in your sandbox was fairly complete, so I took the liberty of moving it to mainspace. I have made some edits to it and tagged a couple sentences that need a citation, if you're interested in contributing further. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:11, 3 December 2018 (UTC)