User talk:Player3914785

Welcome
Hello, and welcome to editing Wikipedia. I hope you will have a successful time here. I see that you have started by adding "short descriptions" to articles, which is helpful. Here are a few comments about how you can improve your short descriptions.
 * A short description should be really short: just an odd phrase or so. For example, "A small town in northern Ruritania", not "A small town in Ruritania in a cabbage farming district, with a population of 1000. The town dates from the thirteenth century, during the reign of Alfred II of Ruritania." That kind of detail belongs in the body of the article,  not in the short description.

Thank you for your contributions, and please do continue. If you follow my comments above your contributions will be even better. JBW (talk) 10:28, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Some of your descriptions end in the middle of a sentence. Please be careful to avoid mustakes duch as that, and always proof-read any editing which you do.
 * One of your edits said "She it is also known as ..." Again, please proof-read your edits to avoid mistakes like that.


 * @JBW it's my honor Player3914785 (talk) 10:36, 13 September 2022 (UTC)