User talk:Plissken81

Your entry at Deindustrialization
You seem to have used more than just OECD website for the assignment, that's very good. It would be great if you could add a note on the reference you had used in Harvard style (ex. "Literature (Smith 1999) has stated that...") and add the publication data to the References section at the bottom of the article. You may also want to indicate you have used OECD (2008) data for the rest of your analysis. You may want to add an interlink or two (like Austria) to the paragraph, but it's not obligatory. A little more analysis with a few numbers would be useful, your entry would vastly benefit from some hard numbers. Overall it is a good piece, and a solid A- which I am sure you will easily upgrade to an A with a few minor changes I outlined above. Good job, --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 05:45, 28 February 2008 (UTC)