User talk:Plloren/Bimodal bilingualism/1mychalia1 Peer Review

Thank you for your feedback!

And yes, that 90s linguist source is used 7 times to defend 6-7 different points about Deaf people, sign languages, etc. And there are many bilingualism-related terms that are not clearly defined as well, so I will probably hyperlink most terms to another existing wiki article.

That "sign-print" page, I will probably add to it first, then "resection" it according to a bimodal-bilingual education perspective (titling it "bimodal bilingual education"), instead of the comparison of Deaf vs hearing children reading levels. Might include some of the existing sign-print info if it applies and if there are enough existing sources.

-Olivia R

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Dear MyChalia,

Thanks so much for your feedback. My team and I will make the changes you suggested. I agree that the Neurological implications section is very long considering it's a heavy topic.

I also agree with you regarding the research/sources provided in the original article: very outdated! My team and I are confident that the new resources collected will challenge all the misconceptions in a data and research based manner.

Finally, we will definitely add a bimodal bilingual education section. We think it will be a great addition to the article.

Thanks again for reviewing our article!

-Paulina Llorente — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plloren (talk • contribs) 18:50, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

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Thank you for providing a peer review. You are the sole author of the peer review. Regarding the hundreds of sign languages, I think it will be difficult for me to include the hundreds of sign languages in the article. It may be difficult to find sources for the social perspective of why a deaf person chooses not to speak. I'll ask my team if we can find those sources. I'm glad to say that I agree with you that the adjustments of negative attitudes toward deaf people who use sign language are negative. I'll ask my team if we can include a section on bimodal bilingual education with specific modalities in the article. I appreciate your peer review once more.

-Carmela