User talk:Plumsac/sandbox

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There are a lot of grammar error for example, capitalize the word that comes after a period. There is good information shared but I would check to see if cites are reliable.

Peer Review
These cites are the first sources that pop up on google. Not sure if these are reliable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ryankerr918 (talk • contribs) 14:48, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

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I still have concerns about source credibility; I suggest more research. Also you will need to revise for grammar and punctuation. JAirhart 14:16, 12 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)