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Great article! The article has a clear structure, a neutral tone, and decent word choice. The tone is encyclopedic .I think some sections could be expanded, such as the comment section. In the comment section, you could maybe categorize the main types of opinions about the event. This article is to describe an event. So I feel like despite talking about process and investigation, you could include more follow up or chain events, so that we have a better idea of the influence of the event. "Process" section could be expanded as well with more details. You could also write about the background of the event to complete the story.