User talk:Pmcfarlane23

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Your submission at Articles for creation: B. Denham Jolly (May 14)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 19:25, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: B. Denham Jolly (June 12)
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LaMona (talk) 19:37, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: B. Denham Jolly (July 11)
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Tseung Kwan O Let's talk 17:49, 11 July 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:B. Denham Jolly has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:B. Denham Jolly. Thanks! Ntb613 (talk) 05:38, 22 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: B. Denham Jolly (September 25)
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Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ (talk) 19:46, 25 September 2016 (UTC)

Denham Jolly
Hello, Peter. I received your e-mail, but I prefer to communicate within Wikipedia, so I am replying here.

Once you submit a draft for review, it can be improved at any time while waiting for the review. There's quite a backlog right now, so resubmitting would just delay things.

When I took a look at the page, I could see that it was coming along, and since there is plenty of published information about Mr. Jolly it will certainly be accepted once the text meets Wikipedia's policies.

I have accepted more than 3,000 drafts into the encyclopedia, and I would like to do the same with this one; I've added more references and there are enough now to show notability, so there is only one thing holding it back; some of the text is not neutral enough. When you admire someone or something, it's natural to want to write about them in a dramatic way, pick out the nicest quotes from the references, etc. However, encyclopedia articles aren't like magazine articles - they just have neutral facts. With your agreement, I would be happy to adjust the text appropriately, and then accept the draft into the encyclopedia.

The draft is a bit overweighted with information about the radio station. There's already an article about the station, at CFXJ-FM, so most of the details should be removed from this article and anything not in the other article added there instead. However, that's not a policy issue, and can be done later.&mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 01:09, 11 December 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: B. Denham Jolly has been accepted
 B. Denham Jolly, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Missvain (talk) 06:18, 11 December 2016 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ronald Derrickson has been accepted
 Ronald Derrickson, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! (t &#183; c)  buidhe  02:32, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kelly Derrickson (May 20)
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 scope_creep Talk  20:34, 20 May 2021 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:02, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kelly Derrickson has been accepted
 Kelly Derrickson, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Bkissin (talk) 16:12, 16 November 2021 (UTC)