User talk:Pockettime

Open University
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Sorry, but I have deleted your recent edits to the Open University article as they did not meet WP's guidelines on style/content. Please see the Help section for information on how to contribute to articles. Or, if I can help, please drop me a line. --New Kind Of Grey (talk) 16:26, 11 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Your edit has once again been removed. Please look at your contribution yourself:


 * They also opened to the introduction of named degrees. http://www.open.ac.uk/about/ou/p3.shtml
 * With the Drawn of the Computer age and where today 8 out of 10 people use a PCs every day
 * To quote the OU “Today more than 180,000 students are interacting with the OU online from home.” http://www.open.ac.uk/about/ou/p3.shtml


 * "They opened to the introduciton..." "The Drawn of the Computer age..."?  This is not correct English, nor capitalisation.  Furthermore, the http refs are incorrectly formatted.  Plus the quotes you offer provide less useful information that the quotes they replace.


 * Please be aware that if you rv you *must* explain why in the Edit summary.


 * Please do not reinsert this information in its current form. It is damaging the article and, potentially, repeated insertion of this low-grade material could be construed as vandalism. --New Kind Of Grey (talk) 07:21, 12 April 2008 (UTC)