User talk:Pomphreyhm/Sandbox/Keith Haring

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It looks like you've got a good start here. As you mentioned, you do need to work on the citations. Also, these two statements seem contradictory to me:

"Haring's work very clearly demonstrates many important political and personal influences."

"In some of his works, including cat. no. 27, the symbolism is buried -- you have to look for it."

Lastly, you should ask for suggestions from the contributors to the original article you are editing. If you have not done so already, post a link to this article in the talk page of the original. If you've already done this, then you should add to that original comment with another call for input. Be sure to clearly specify the sections of the article you plan to change. Frankcjones (talk) 21:05, 30 October 2013 (UTC)