User talk:Poohtwo

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Daniel Bar-Tal
As I noted in my edit summary when I reverted your extensive rewrite of Bar-Tal's biography, we don't write Wikipedia biographies to fit the subjects' desires. If there are specific errors to be addressed, please bring them up on the article's talk page so your suggested changes can be evaluate by uninvolved third parties. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 18:43, 6 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Dear @WikiDan61,
 * Thank you for your comments and suggestions regarding my previous editing attempt of this page. I've moved the revised version to User:Poohtwo/Bar-Tal and would appreciate if will be able to proofread it and offer further suggestions. Kind regards, Poohtwo (talk) 14:22, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
 * I'm concerned that you've only referenced Bar-Tal's own writings, rather than what others have written about him. Your biography offers an in-depth analysis of Bar-Tal's thinking and contributions, but without secondary sources, we have no way of knowing if others find Bar-Tal's work meaningful or notable. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 14:29, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for your helpful comments. I have now integrated some external reviews regarding Bar-Tal's contribution to these various fields of research. Poohtwo (talk) 14:02, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
 * @WikiDan61, Thanks again for your helpful comments. I have now integrated some external sources and reviews, assessing Bar-Tal's contributions in various fields of research. Poohtwo (talk) 17:12, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Dear @WikiDan61, Kindly review my newest additions to User:Poohtwo/Bar-Tal and offer suggestions on its suitability for publication. Alternatively, if you find the content unbiased and adequate, please transfer it to the Daniel Bar-Tal page, so it may better represent his life's-work. Kind Regards, Poohtwo (talk) 07:10, 26 April 2022 (UTC)