User talk:PossumPerson/sandbox

The lead section has not been edited by PossumPerson yet. The intro that exists is decent but is short and the information that is added should be written as a summary of points to provide context and a POA.

The article is well written and is clearly organized. The content is relevant and balanced. The tone is also neutral and provides facts only. Some sections could be expanded. The deforestation section is a lot shorter than the coal mining and fracking sections considering it is a similar variable. This could provide more information about the environmental problems in Appalachia. The event of Centralia Mine Fire has been listed but does not have any information yet. The date should also be in the subheading to be consistent with the other events. And maybe for Buffalo Creek as well?

Citations still need to be added in the wiki format. Also links for key terms should be added to help other users. For the part that has already been written more links could be added like fracking.

Overall, the additions made to this article are solid and provide more important information. The intro could be edited more and more information about the event and deforestation could help. The citations and links also need to be added. OctopusLoveHats (talk) 01:49, 3 December 2020 (UTC)