User talk:Prabh1899/sandbox

Great article evaluation, Prabh! It seems that you've taken the time to engage with the article and think about what needs changing and updating. You've identified issues with the article that need to be addressed, and you've identified questions that this version of the article has left you with. I look forward to seeing your draft :) Griffyn1987 (talk) 18:39, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

Hi there, Thank you for your draft evaluation and i will be working on the suggestions you made, they were helpful. It is good you see you understood my plan for the article. I have started working on the material already present in the article, making sure the citations are right and the language has a bit more flow to it. I will keep in mind for using similar words for the general audience. As for working on one aspect off the article and making it better, my group and I have divided our work to make sure we do our best in developing the article. Prabh1899 (talk) 20:21, 17 March 2019 (UTC)prabh1899