User talk:Prateeksanyal

--WeilongH (talk) 04:43, 27 March 2012 (UTC) how are we going to divide the work? i think we can find a lot of resources in the home page of the booster juice website.

--Prateeksanyal (talk) 05:08, 27 March 2012 (UTC) We should have the following: Official website content Reviews and Ratings Nutrition facts and menu(Maybe?) Financial Records

--WeilongH (talk) 05:13, 27 March 2012 (UTC) ok, maybe i can do some research on the nutrition facts and menu? which one you want to do?

--Prateeksanyal (talk) 05:17, 27 March 2012 (UTC) I think I will handle the website content. Im going to try and be as concise as possible. Anyone willing to volunteer to find good pictures with references?

--WeilongH (talk) 18:34, 27 March 2012 (UTC) ok, so i think we should meet and discuss it in library tonight.?

--Jan.uy (talk) 01:25, 28 March 2012 (UTC)So I booked the study room for 2 tommorow, it is in IB room C.

--WeilongH (talk) 03:01, 28 March 2012 (UTC) so what time r we going to meet tomorrow ? and also, i think i will make a menu of the booster juice,but this menu will include the nutrition facts in it. for example, there will be calories, total fat, and protein too. what do you guys think? I'm still trying to figrue it out how to do the formatting in wikipedia.

--Jan.uy (talk) 03:56, 28 March 2012 (UTC)we're meeting tommorow at 2 pm in IB study room C.

--Jiaon (talk) 04:05, 28 March 2012 (UTC)yeah include the nutrition facts

--WeilongH (talk) 04:13, 28 March 2012 (UTC) so how are you guys doing? doing reviews now? i think i should also write an article about the nutrition facts of the booster juice. because i think only the menu is not enough. and i found a website about the reviews, you guys who are doing the reviews stuff can take a look at it this is the website http://www.rachelhewitt.com/2010/09/booster-juice-review/ i hope it is useful.

--WeilongH (talk) 18:38, 28 March 2012 (UTC) i almost finish the menu, i will upload to wikipedia later at night, after the menu i will write an article about nutrition fact, so keep in touch.

--Jan.uy (talk) 19:54, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Does anyone know how to cite on wikipedia?

--Prateeksanyal (talk) 20:17, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Someone will need to Google and find out how to do citations. Updates on my work so far: I have the awards list ready, I am working currently on the super foods list and some information on the founders. The meeting today was very productive, I feel like we will be done with this by tonight. Information is limited though. If only booster juice disclosed more information about itself online...

Prateeksanyal (talk) 20:19, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Side note, to create a seperate section, just type ==your title==. The content page is autocreated.

--Jan.uy (talk) 20:29, 28 March 2012 (UTC)I am currently editing the history section of the article an will upload it to Prateek's sandbox later tonight. If anyone can figure out how to cite on wikipedia please post it here. I am also currently trying to find out how citing works and if i figure it out i'll post it here.

--Farrukh23 (talk) 20:44, 28 March 2012 (UTC) I am working on the business philosophy section, will post it to Prateek's sandbox by tonight. Still deciding weather or not i should include booster juice's mission statement to the article. any suggestions?

--Farrukh23 (talk) 21:21, 28 March 2012 (UTC) would it be better instead of adding the exact mission statement, i add a section called "mission" and describe what their mission is or goals are?

--Jan.uy (talk) 21:32, 28 March 2012 (UTC)yea i think if you just summarize their mission statement and we put that in like the intro of the article would be good

--Farrukh23 (talk) 21:35, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Okay, cool.

--Jan.uy (talk) 21:47, 28 March 2012 (UTC)so i just added the history section to sandbox artile. i'll try to add some more because it turned out shorter than it looked on word

--Jan.uy (talk) 21:50, 28 March 2012 (UTC)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_sources this article tells you how to cite on wikipedia --WeilongH (talk) 03:52, 29 March 2012 (UTC) finally, i have done the writting of the nutrition fact. so everyone done their work? --WeilongH (talk) 04:09, 29 March 2012 (UTC) i posted my work in the sand box already, but i don't know is it good enough, can anyone give me some advise? also i still got a menu.... should i post it there ... thats gonna be a lot .. so i don't know should i post it or not? im afraid thats gonna be way too much..?

--Farrukh23 (talk) 04:20, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Im almost done too, will post it up soon. and i think you should post the menu aswell, why not.. --WeilongH (talk) 04:27, 29 March 2012 (UTC) the menu is 7 pages long in Microsoft word, so I'm afraid its going to be too long.. so thats why I'm thinking, and i need your advise --WeilongH (talk) 04:32, 29 March 2012 (UTC) how about i post it up first, let you guys take a look at it.? see should we keep the menu or not?

--Farrukh23 (talk) 04:35, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Yeah, do that.. we'll let everyone decide weather or not to keep the menu --Jiaon (talk) 04:37, 29 March 2012 (UTC)yeah post it up first so we can have an preview --Jiaon (talk) 04:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC)do you guys still want reviews? --Jiaon (talk) 04:39, 29 March 2012 (UTC)are we going to meet up in the morning or we'll just organize everything tonight

--Jan.uy (talk) 04:42, 29 March 2012 (UTC)I think we should have the menu as a list of flavours to make it looked shorter. The individual nutrition facts just makes it a bit too long. What do you guys think? --WeilongH (talk) 04:44, 29 March 2012 (UTC) f you guys want to meet in the morning, i can do it. but i think we can get it done tonight, just see how much we can get it done by tonight.

--Jan.uy (talk) 04:46, 29 March 2012 (UTC) I agree i think we can finish this all tonight but if we really have to we can meet up tommorow but we should be able to finish this by tonight

--Farrukh23 (talk) 04:47, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Yeah, just write the menu as a list of flavors. And i don't think there would be a need to meet up again, we can just email everything to prateek by tonight

--Jan.uy (talk) 05:03, 29 March 2012 (UTC)so did anyone figure out how to properly cite? --Jiaon (talk) 05:03, 29 March 2012 (UTC)sounds good! --WeilongH (talk) 05:13, 29 March 2012 (UTC) you guys can take a look right now. is it look good now? i think its pretty good now. what do you guys think.

how about we just create a new topic called cited? lol.. and post your name in front of your cited? --WeilongH (talk) 05:28, 29 March 2012 (UTC) i think we just post it in the reference, its gonna be fine. because you can take a look at others sandbox, they just post it there.

--Jan.uy (talk) 05:48, 29 March 2012 (UTC)I figured out how to cite...here's an example

On July 27, 2006, storeowners, Frank and Simon Voisin led the Kitchener’s Sunrise Mall Booster Juice store break the current record for the World’s Largest Smoothie. After 3.5 hours of blending, 7 blenders, and over 25,000 ounces of smoothie (740 litres) the challenge was accomplished. Selling the World’s Largest Smoothie into 24 oz cups, Booster Juice was able to help raise $1000 for the Canadian Cancer Society.''' '''

The bolded part is the part you need to add to put in the reference. You put the link and then add a space then put the title that appears on the reference list

--Jan.uy (talk) 05:49, 29 March 2012 (UTC)sorry it doesnt appear on the page you need to go to edit to see the part where the reference is --Jiaon (talk) 05:55, 29 March 2012 (UTC)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:CITE#General_reference Prateeksanyal (talk) 07:04, 29 March 2012 (UTC) So I am currently editing and forming my inputs. Still pretty unsure about citations, please help me out tomorrow morning with that. Also I may make minor edits to your articles, proof reading and stuff.

--Farrukh23 (talk) 07:46, 29 March 2012 (UTC) ok, i added the mission statement and business philosophy, if there any changes i should do, let me know. and i will email u the screen shots Prateek. Prateeksanyal (talk) 10:50, 29 March 2012 (UTC) I added my work too, I made some edits and editions to some sections you guys did. I feel like the article is complete now, if someone could, please take a look at our reference formats and fix them up. I am not sure they are very good.

--Jan.uy (talk) 12:24, 29 March 2012 (UTC)So I just did some editing on everyone's referencing and I think it looks better now with a title on every reference. Take a look

--Jan.uy (talk) 13:31, 29 March 2012 (UTC) So it seems this is the final copy of this article? How are we going to submit this?

--Farrukh23 (talk) 17:24, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Ok, i gave my part some final touches and i think we're good to go. Good work guys!

Prateeksanyal (talk) 17:26, 29 March 2012 (UTC) All edits are complete, I have changed a lot of the nutrition facts section. It was mostly syntax errors and some unneeded information. Great jobs guys! We've all worked hard for this.

--Jan.uy (talk) 17:40, 29 March 2012 (UTC) THe article looks great! We've added quite a bit to the original one. --WeilongH (talk) 18:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC) so are we done now? everything is good right ?

March 2012
Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia. However, please do not add promotional material to articles or other Wikipedia pages, as you did to Booster Juice. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. Whenaxis (contribs) DR goes to Wikimania! 20:44, 30 March 2012 (UTC)

--Prateeksanyal (talk) 00:14, 31 March 2012 (UTC) Thank you for this information. We are extremely sorry, we did not realize we were promoting the brand. We were just doing a university assignment.


 * No problem. :) I can give some pages that you can look at when adding content to Wikipedia, such as, our reliable sources guideline and our neutral point of view guideline. Reliable sources should be used in the form of references from reliable, third party sources rather than company websites. Articles should be written in a neutral point of view, instead of bias towards the company (such as avoiding excessive content from company website - mission statements, nutritional information, flavours, company social networking accounts, etc.) If you need anything else, just let me know by leaving a message on my talk page. Regards, Whenaxis (contribs) DR goes to Wikimania! 01:06, 31 March 2012 (UTC)


 * right., I removed a little, and intended to remove more; Whenaxis did it all at once and did it fine. I think it might be permissible to add a short list of the different products--we often do that, & it can be taken from the website: just a list, one line each, just enough to indicate what it is. without details.We've done as much for Pepsi, and some other similar brands. But for the details, the company website is the place.  DGG ( talk ) 01:27, 31 March 2012 (UTC)