User talk:Prettyriver

hey
You'll note that I reverted most of your changes to the article on bite inhibition; this is because your sentence structure was non-optimal and made things less comprehensible. I acknowledge that you had good intentions, however. DS (talk) 13:13, 27 February 2016 (UTC)


 * I am a newby here but have considerable experience as a technical writer. I am also a breeder and trainer of Golden Retrievers. I guess I think you have missed the important distinction a soft mouth and bite inhibition. Sadly, there is no point in starting an edit war or poking my nose in where it is not wanted. --Prettyriver (talk) 22:29, 27 February 2016 (UTC)


 * I do apologize for any hurt feelings, but I ask you to reread the original passage, which already made it clear that although (phrase B) is sometimes used as a synonym for (phrase A), (phrase B) has a separate meaning of its own. I very much don't want to make this into an edit war or to otherwise be unpleasant to you. DS (talk) 14:04, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I will leave your article alone. I feel my edit was definitely an improvement or I would not have offered my time and made the effort to improve it. I think that what you have is better than nothing so I will bow out. --Prettyriver (talk) 14:43, 29 February 2016 (UTC)