User talk:Prisci8

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Hello, Prisci8, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Sage and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review of Hmong Americans
Hi Priscilla! Overall, your edits on "Hmong Americans" look great. I especially like your use of statistical data to support your claims, your references look great and they are implemented well. Your article is easy to follow. I have a few suggestions as to how you might improve your article further: -Revise the lead for grammatical clarity and a more broad summary of the whole article -Make sure links are linked only once and the first time they appear in the article -Fix some language for clarity purposes (i.e. avoid run-on sentences and passive writing)

The sections that you edited are well-written as standalone paragraphs, but perhaps making some minor edits to the article itself and tying your work into the rest would streamline the whole thing. Great job!! Natsz72 (talk) 18:59, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi Natalie! Thanks so much for reviewing my edits on "Hmong Americans". Your comments provide great guidance into bettering the article's flow and grammar consistency. Prisci8 (talk) 03:29, 23 April 2020 (UTC)