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Peer Review
Really interesting and complete article! I really like the sections you had describing her films - very clear and unbiased. I made a couple of edits pertaining to grammar, and a couple of phrases which used words like 'passion for' or 'love for' as these can be interpreted as subjective. I also think it might be good to vary your word voice a bit, as the use of the word filmmaker got to be a little redundant and as a word itself it's quite vague in its meaning. Finally I would suggest that the 'after career' section go after the filmography, as the filmography would be better suited closer to the section on her career. Overall, great job! Amichevrolet (talk) 20:18, 5 November 2019 (UTC) AmiChevrolet (sorry i accidentally posted this on the talk page of the article)