User talk:Priya1302

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Hello, Priya1302, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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A kitten for you!
Hi, Priya. Thanks for sending me a link to your sandbox. I look forward to seeing all the skills you develop online in this course.

Jrradney (talk) 19:23, 19 January 2018 (UTC) 

Suggestions
Your work on Women in Law Enforcement has the following lead: Women in law enforcement It used to be that only nursing, teaching, and clerical positions were open to women. A small number of women worked as correctional officers and their assignments were usually limited to peripheral tasks. The integration of women into law enforcement positions can be considered a large social change. Women were traditionally limited to working in juvenile facilities, handling crimes involving female offenders, and performing clerical tasks. In the past, women were not considered as capable as men in law enforcement. Recently many decades have opened up and have given women more options to go out and build their careers on.

I would suggest the following revision: Women in law enforcement The integration of women into law enforcement positions can be considered a large social change. A century ago, there were few jobs open to women in law enforcement. A small number of women worked as correctional officers, and their assignments were usually limited to peripheral tasks. Women traditionally worked in juvenile facilities, handled crimes involving female offenders, or performed clerical tasks. In these early days, women were not considered as capable as men in law enforcement. Recently, many options have opened up, creating new possible careers.

Any ideas? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jrradney (talk • contribs) 02:10, 28 February 2018 (UTC)