User talk:Probfor engl101/sandbox

Comments from Emily for Peer Review

 * Source needed for the All-Big Ten Freshman Team
 * In the sophomore season section it would be better to put November 11, 2017
 * "...season in his junior year Miles Sanders served as the backup, carrying.." (I would just add a comma after year)
 * In the junior season section it would probably make the article sound better to add the year after the dates
 * Sources needed for the awards
 * Maybe add a table with the years he got the awards
 * Wiki Link out to Saquan Barkley's Wikipedia page when he's mentioned
 * In freshman season section spell out second
 * Maybe add a little more information on Rutgers just to make it clear to readers what it is
 * Lower case the F in finished in the junior season section
 * Sources needed
 * Maybe expand on some things so average readers who don't understand football are able to understand what you're talking about like: reps, kick returns, and terms such as that.
 * When you're editing the article later on add the table that you already have to the statistics section on the article page

Emhenry27 (talk) 15:47, 21 March 2019 (UTC)