User talk:Probiotictracker

Help request
I apologize for not signing my posts. How does the Ganeden Biotech page look now? Does is still read as an advertisement? --Probiotictracker (talk) 18:37, 21 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Hi there. I have moved your help request down here, and put it into a section. It is easier to follow things if you make a new section at the end of your talk page for each new conversation.


 * I will look at the article now, and reply here soon. Cheers,  Chzz  ►  18:58, 21 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Reference: Mikhail Gershenzon


 * (When discussing an article, please provide a link by putting the name as, as above)


 * I looked at the article, and I think that there are still some problems that need to be addressed.


 * The main issue is that not all of the facts are supported by references to reliable sources. For example, how can I, as a reader, verify that it is the largest seller of over-the-counter probiotics in the United States, it was founded in 1997, that the CSO identified a delivery system for lactic acid producing bacteria, etc etc.


 * So - it isn't written like an advertisement any more, and I will remove that tag, but I will add another saying that the references need improving.


 * For more help, you can either;


 * Leave a message on my own talk page;
 * Use a - please create a new section at the end of your own talk page, put , and ask your question - remember to 'sign' your name by putting ~ at the end;
 * Talk to us live.


 * Best wishes,  Chzz  ►  19:08, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much for your help and input. I really appreciate it.Probiotictracker (talk) 20:07, 21 May 2009 (UTC)


 * You're welcome. Use the methods above if you need more.  Chzz  ►  20:09, 21 May 2009 (UTC)