User talk:Proclivities

I removed the adjective "wanton" from the initial definition, since "wanton", by its definition, implies intent and cruelty, or at least some sort of deliberation. Recklessness implies a lack of deliberation.

RE: Earle Hagen
Hello. Regarding you changes to Earle Hagen. Per: WP:MOS, you don't want to over burden the opening sentence/paragraph/section. You want to make it a very brief highlight, then go into depth in the body of the article. I recommend that you move your addition down in chronological order into the main body, and revert the opening paragraph back to smaller-concise version.


 * Lead section
 * Writing better articles
 * Layout

And, lets have some Verifiability and Citing sources also.

Thanks. IP4240207xx (talk) 19:27, 30 May 2008 (UTC)


 * ✅ I did it for you this time. IP4240207xx (talk)