User talk:ProdigalSheep/Langerhans cell sarcoma

Peer Review Feedback

 * Check for readability
 * First sentence of pathophysiology section is incomplete - typo?
 * maybe include a quick description of what Birbeck granules are
 * otherwise, article is straightforward but readable
 * Adherence to topic / Not getting off track
 * This seems fine - no unnecessary tangents
 * Organization & Flow
 * I would move the sentence regarding markers required for diagnosis of LCS closer to the beginning of that section (then group the sentences about Birbeck granules together, rather than in two separate sections)
 * Use of images and figures
 * No images or pictures yet.
 * Proper use of citations
 * Yes
 * Quality Sources, i.e. resources open to the public
 * Yes
 * Check for bias and equal-sided arguments
 * No indication of bias

Ncnguyen133 (talk) 21:05, 16 September 2022 (UTC)