User talk:Ps146a/National Assembly (Nigeria), Tabitha Adeleke

Your goals for the assignment seem like they will be productive and also improve the wikipedia page that you are working on. One thing to keep in mind is the emphasis on finding sources that are relevant to beat the old ones that aren't as relevant. So, maybe finding more modern examples from scholarly articles about your topic is the way to go!

The paragraph you wrote was strong and straight to the point. The final sentence, however, seems a little biased. It is also out of place considering the information that was given before it. Maybe rewording or erasing it would help in making that paragraph better. Another suggestion is to replace that sentence with a statistical answer that shows that that sentence is true. That way, it sounds less opinion-based and more informational.

Thank you!BatoolHMakki (talk) 06:30, 4 April 2022 (UTC)