User talk:Pth2323

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Global peace system
May be I am mistaken about labelling the article as "original research. However the red flag for me was a huge number or small unreferenced sections. After closer examination I guess they came from Shifferd (2011). Please add the proper footnotes to these sections. Staszek Lem (talk) 16:44, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you. The article and concept are indeed based on the scholarly findings by Shifferd which are outlined in the book (academic publisher). It should be indicated appropriately in the overview now. It is also indicated that the 3 categories with 28 sections under "Global Trends" are based on Shifferd's scholarly work. It would seem redundant to provided references for each section bellow, or would you provide them for each section again?. Thank you again for your input. Pth2323 (talk) 17:46, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Please keep in mind than wikipedia is a collaborative effort. It is quite possible that someone will significantly expand some of the 28 sections, and the single reference on top will no longer be 100% applicable (Suppose some adds unreferenced or, worse, wrong information.) Therefore, while it may seem redundant now, each section must have a reference. Also, I would advice to add page numbers into footnotes. Staszek Lem (talk) 18:46, 20 September 2013 (UTC)

P.S. Please notice that in wikipedia style, section titles are not capitalized. Please edit accordingly. Staszek Lem (talk) 18:46, 20 September 2013 (UTC)