User talk:PurdueATLmarley

Proposed deletion of University School of Jackson
A proposed deletion template has been added to the article University School of Jackson, suggesting that it be deleted according to the proposed deletion process. All contributions are appreciated, but this article may not satisfy Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and the deletion notice should explain why (see also "What Wikipedia is not" and Wikipedia's deletion policy). You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the  notice, but please explain why you disagree with the proposed deletion in your edit summary or on its talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised because even though removing the deletion notice will prevent deletion through the proposed deletion process, the article may still be deleted if it matches any of the speedy deletion criteria or it can be sent to Articles for Deletion, where it may be deleted if consensus to delete is reached. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 21:11, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

University School of Jackson
I have removed the proposed deletion tag on this article. The recent expansion has addressed the concerns I had. However, the tone of the article is still not in keeping with Wikipedia standards. The article has too much of a "gee I really like this school because..." feeling to it. Personal reminiscences about individual teachers are really not appropriate. In order to improve the Academics section, you should refer to actual academic statistics (which are probably readily available from local sources -- people compare schools all the time), and remove the information about how nice and dedicated the teachers are. Facts, not opinions, are what make truly good encyclopedia articles. Just some friendly suggestions from a fellow WikiEditor! WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 12:37, 22 October 2008 (UTC)