User talk:Pwincess pari

Grammar issues at Shakti — Astitva Ke Ehsaas Ki
Hi there, though I know you mean well, I've had to revert some of your recent changes at Shakti — Astitva Ke Ehsaas Ki because they were confusing and laden with grammar errors. Something that's important to note: We shouldn't be getting bogged down with episode-by-episode details in the plot section. The entire plot section shouldn't exceed 500 words per WP:TVPLOT. That means we have to be very general in describing the entire series storyline. Thank you. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:39, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

WP:CRYSTAL
Hi there, re: this edit, it's unclear how you know what role Drashti Dhami will perform in Pardes Mein Hai Meraa Dil. There is a note within the cast section that is intended to remind editors such as yourself to source additions to the cast section. If you read this information somewhere, that Dhami would play Naina, then please add the reference when you add the content. This is a matter of Wikipedia policy. Thanks. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 16:53, 14 September 2016 (UTC)

Parentheses
Hi there, re: this two things: 1) Parentheses are rarely the right decision. They tend to clutter up articles and look very unprofessional. The same content can be presented in a far nicer manner if you write it in sentence form.
 * Instead of: Reena Kapoor as Nimmi Kaur ( Soumya's Mother )
 * Try: Reena Kapoor as Nimmi Kaur, Soumya's mother

"Mother", by the way, should not be capitalized. It is not a proper noun. Neither should father, sister, brother, etc. 2) With regard to content like "Main Female Lead" and "Main Male Lead", we don't use interpretive labels like protagonist, antagonist, villain, hero, and likewise, we don't need "lead". If someone is in the Main cast section, they are presumed to be main/lead characters. Their position in this section should be dictated by the producers, presumably from onscreen "starring" credits. Unilaterally deciding that two of the various main characters are "leads" is interpretive. There can absolutely be multiple leads in a TV series. We also don't need to be told that someone is a male or a female, that is obvious by looking at them.

I'm fixing both issues. Thanks. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 02:47, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Disruptive editing
Hi there, this is disruptive. As has already been explained, we don't use interpretive labels, and we don't need to explain performer gender to readers. If you disagree, you're free to open a discussion on the article's talk page, but repeatedly submitting the changes is problematic, and considering you've added more interpretive language, going from "Main Female Lead" to "Main Female Lead Protagonist" that raises questions about whether you're making the changes to be deliberately disruptive. If that's not your intention, please open a discussion and explain your rationale. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 00:04, 21 September 2016 (UTC)

WP:SLASH and ambiguous information
Hi there, in this edit, you introduced another character name separated by a slash. At Wikipedia, we avoid using slashes because they create ambiguities. In this case, readers who are not familiar with the series will have no idea why there are two names next to Adaa Khan's name. Does Khan play two roles? Is one name a nickname for the other name? Are they twins? A basic slash doesn't communicate anything. We should be using words to explain these things for readers, ex: "Adaa Khan in dual roles as Shesha and Ruchikka, twin sisters who XYZ...". As a result, the content now has a clarify template next to it, so if you could please clear this up, it would be appreciated. Thank you. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 21:11, 8 October 2016 (UTC)