User talk:Qdpt/Eosinopenia

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Lead

Your lead provides a solid general overview of the condition without being overly detailed or repeating information in subsequent sections. Opening sentence is direct and concisely depicts the topic at hand.

Suggestions

- Include a short description of the specific function of eosinophils compared to the other WBCs mentioned

- Provide a brief layout/explanation of the sections that are to follow

Content

Overall, the content included in this draft is adequately relevant to the topic, both from a physiological and pathological clinical perspective. Sources appear to be up to date with the current literature.

Suggestions

- Definition and diagnosis section: include the normal physiological range of eosinophils

- Are there any other conditions/medications/risk factors associated with eosinopenia that could be included?

- Expand inflammation and COVID sections

Tone

The content is delivered in a neutral, non-convincing manner. All information is objective and backed up by peer-reviewed secondary literature. There appears to be no biased or overrepresented topics within the article.

Sources

All content is backed up by reliable secondary sources of information. The oldest source of information was published in 2018, reflecting a pool of referenced information that is consistent with the current, up-to-date literature. Majority of sources are peer reviewed journals within the relevant fields.

Overall Impressions

The content here is well written and easy to understand for the general population, while still providing the relevant clinical applications of the condition. No grammatical or spelling errors. The organizational structure of the article follows a natural progression. Am08wiki26 (talk) 18:06, 8 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback! I have incorporated it into my final article. Qdpt (talk) 02:16, 12 February 2023 (UTC)