User talk:Qiliang12/sandbox

Review from Carl
I really enjoyed reading what you've got so far, here're the ideas I talked about: Let me know if you have any questions about what I put here or have anything else you want comments on!
 * In re-organizing the history section (definitely needed) for some change or policy X you could have sections for 'Before X' and 'After X,' or 'Effect of X' depending on where you want to direct attention.
 * More clarity about chronology will be really helpful. For instance, in what period(s) was the hukou system key? Also whatperiod are those migration rate figures telling us about (in the 4th paragraph of Migration_in_China)?
 * An interesting way to tie the history section into the rest of the article like you discussed would be to emphasize the lasting effects of historical policies.
 * The Migration_in_China section could be re-framed to emphasize migrants' perspective (e.g. maybe 'Surplus Labor' → 'Lack of Jobs')

— Carl (Seaplant (talk) 04:58, 17 March 2018 (UTC))