User talk:Qkyang

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Anh's comment
Your article seems to be very well-organized and balanced. The introduction is concise, to-the-point, interesting, and well-written. I'm curious about the water supply system's influence - how many people does it affect? what role does it play for individuals, families, or society? And what effect would the ongoing/ upcoming repairs might bring? Also, the History part could be expanded too. Goodluck!

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

Jackie's Peer Review
Your article seems really great. The language keeps a neutral tone throughout the entire article. The intro is the only place where I feel the language is favoring the New York water supply system more than others and it looses its neutral tone for a little bit. The article is missing an entire section about the history of the supply system and I think adding to it would be very beneficial to understand how it all came to be. Some of the sections throughout the article are a lot shorter than others. For example, I would try to look into expanding upon the NYC Water Board section, as well as the distribution system section. Lastly, the last section about upgrades reads a little choppy. Smoothing it out could help improve the flow of the article. Overall, I think this is a very informational article and your group has done a good job in editing so far. Also, maybe some pictures will help bring it to life a little bit!Jackie Kerth (talk) 07:17, 19 November 2019 (UTC)