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Henrik Peschel
Hello QuantifiedElf,

Firstly I want to mention that I'm a newbie to Wikipedia. I apologize for any mistakes due to my lack of knowledge in contributing for Wikipedia.

You declined the submission of German cameraman and film director Henrik Peschel because the "references do not adequately evidence the subject's notability". Furthermore you commented that "The sources provided don't mention Henrik Peschel and much of the content appears to be original research."

Could there be possibly be a misunderstanding? Henrik Peschel has for many years worked under the artist name Henna Peschel. All four citations provided mention Henna Peschel. Henriks three mentioned nominations and awards are documented by sources. Grimme-Preis is according to Wiki "one of the most prestigious awards for German television", Hamburger Abendblatt is the largest Newspaper in Hamburg with a daily circulation of more than 280.000 copies according to Wiki and lastly there is the website of Unerhört music Filmfestival. SPIEGEL is the most important news magazine in Germany, according to Wiki "one of Europe's largest publications of its kind, similar in style and layout to American news magazines such as Time or Newsweek". Henrik Peschels work in film is also supported by data in IMDB.

The content of the submission is only a brief career overview relevant for international readers. More detail is on his Wikipedia German page http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henrik_Peschel

Could you please give me a hint, in which direction I can improve the submission. Are the three mentioned nominations and awards not enough for proof of his notability or do you need more sources and citations as proof that he received three nominations and awards?

Thank you.

By the way, his new film Si-o-se Pol is currently in postproduction with a premiere expected in the second quarter this year so there are no reliable news sources yet.

Timothyweber (talk) 16:37, 19 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Timothyweber, I'm glad you reached out for help. Everyone is welcome to edit Wikipedia and I'm happy to help you out with some advice.


 * I did misunderstand the citations. My cursory search of the sources for "Henrik" was inadequate. On a second look, I think Henrik Peschel comes close to meeting Wikipedia's notability guidelines for inclusion. To qualify for inclusion, Henrik should be "the subject of multiple published secondary sources which are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject." So it's not only important that the sources be reliable (like Der Spiegel), but the coverage must also be significant. The Spiegel article is strong and I would like to see 2 or 3 more articles of a similar scope and depth. Here's an article about Henrik in Der Freitag, perhaps you could incorporate it into the article. The Hamburger Abendblatt doesn't look as good because the subject of the article is the film festival, Henrik is just a passing mention. The UNERHÖRT coverage also doesn't help with notability because it is not independent of the subject. Further, IMDb is not a reliable source on Wikipedia.


 * Do a little more research to see if you can discover 1 or 2 more sources like Spiegel Online or Der Freitag. If you can find something else, I will probably approve the article for creation. I also suggest that you support all information with inline citations. For instance, the first paragraph in the "Career" section has no citations and could be viewed by some editors as original research. Unsupported content can be removed at any time. QuantifiedElf (talk) 00:07, 20 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi QuantifiedElf, thanks for your advice. I have now added citations from Die Tageszeitung, Die Welt and Hamburger Morgenpost. There are also more articles in national media Frankfurter Allgemeine and Die Tageszeitung  and other magazines like the interview in Der Freitag, but I don't see how I can incorporate them into the submission without repeating the content. Do you think this is enough to provide proof of significant coverage?

Timothyweber (talk) 22:19, 20 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Timothy, I have accepted the article for creation, you can view it here. I added the Der Freitag source and I encourage you to add any other sources that you have available. Let me know if I can help you out with anything else! QuantifiedElf (talk) 03:29, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi QuantifiedElf, Thanks for your help & advice! After Henriks new film is released later this year there might be more attention in the press. In that case I will add information and sources. Timothyweber (talk) 15:14, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

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Donald Gross
Hi Quantified Elf, I am new to wikipedia and am trying to understand the types of references you are looking for me to add to verify the content- and if you would like me to remove some of the ones I have used since the list is very long.

Are any of the following websites considered reliable websites? And, is anything I've already cited considered reliable (my thought is the first 3)?

http://www.speakerfile.com/speakers/donald.gross

http://www.albrightstonebridge.com/team/donald-gross/

http://fdlbooksalon.com/2012/12/08/fdl-book-salon-welcomes-donald-gross/

http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/14619519-the-china-fallacy?

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/donald-gross/

http://www.wortfm.org/donald-gross-the-china-fallacy/

http://www.amazon.com/The-China-Fallacy-ebook/dp/B00ACJA8L0

Please let me know what guidance you can provide so I can update this page appropriately. Thank you!

Blmscott28 (talk) 18:00, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Blmscott28, the FDL Book Salon reference is the only one that helps to establish notability for Donald Gross because it is coverage of a book that he's written. This still doesn't make him notable enough for a Wikipedia article, and I don't see any references in the proposed article that would help. See WP:BIO and WP:AUTHOR for more information on notability requirements. You'll also benefit from reading through WP:Reliable sources. If you have any specific questions, feel free to ask. QuantifiedElf (talk) 23:30, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

John C. Meringolo
Hello QuantifiedElf,

Thank you for taking your time to review the article that I am creating http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/John_C._Meringolo. I am relatively new to wikipedia contributions, but believe my writing background and advice from contributors will make me a valued contributor to the community.

The comments you left were that the article lacked a "formal tone" and should be written from a "neutral point of view." --> Please guide me to specific areas where the tone or point of view lack neutrality. I was diligent to make sure there was no first or second person pronouns or sentences and that everything was supported by a source. Thank you for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thesjb (talk • contribs) 18:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Thesjb. Don't forget to sign your posts with four tildes ( ~ ) whenever you're on a Wikipedia talk page.


 * Refer to my specific comment listed below the "Submission declined" boxes: "Needs significant copy editing, maybe even a re-write, to reach a neutral POV." Head over to Writing better articles and review all sections. It's a valuable resource.


 * For your next improvements, you should focus on eliminating editorial language (MOS:OPED) like "high profile" and "notably". Let facts stand for themselves rather than propping them up on vaguely attributed terms.


 * After you take care of the editorializing, you should work on including better inline citations. A lot of your content is unsupported, which makes it hard to verify neutrality. Consider this selection: "The four-credit course prepares students with the theoretical knowledge and practical competence to properly handle Federal criminal cases, including, simulated arraignments, pleas, and evidentiary hearings. Students also enjoy guest lectures from Assistant United States Attorneys and from noted criminal defense practitioners."


 * They "enjoy guest lectures from Assistant United States Attorneys" doesn't sound neutral to me, especially when there is no reliable source attached to the statement.QuantifiedElf (talk) 19:07, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

→Hi Quantified Elf,

Thank you for your helpful comments as they relate to Article for Creation: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/John_C._Meringolo. I implemented the necessary suggestions regarding editorializing and independent sources. I also deleted unnecessary language that propped up facts. Please let me know if there is anything else left to do in order to have the article published.

Thanks, Thesjb (talk) 14:27, 3 May 2013 (UTC)thesjb

USvsTHEM
USvsTHEMinc (talk) 22:22, 10 May 2013 (UTC) Hey Quantified Elf,

You recently declined my submission: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Paul_Harris but I believe it meets the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics that you referenced. Paul Harris has a record certified gold or higher in at least one country (Dirty Vegas - s/t album), has released two or more albums on a major record label (all 3 Dirty Vegas records were released on majors), has become one of the most prominent representatives of a notable style (Balearic Beats) and has been nominated for a major award (a Grammy for Days Go By). He also qualifies under several of the composer guidelines as well. Would it be possble for you to have a second look at the submission and let me know what you think? Perhaps I'm just not referencing things correctly. Thanks!
 * Hello USvsTHEMinc. First things first, your username appears to violate Wikipedia's username policy as it is unambiguously related to this marketing company. Before moving forward with the Paul Harris article, you need to request a name change at WP:CHU/S. While you're waiting for the name change to go through, you need to read about Wikipedia's conflict of interest policies at WP:COI. If you have a conflict of interest with, you are encouraged to disclose it on your userpage. Once you've changed your username and reviewed the COI guidelines I'll be happy to review the Paul Harris with you. Cheers! QuantifiedElf (talk) 17:22, 12 May 2013 (UTC)

Badlands Unlimited
Hello QuantifiedElf,

Thanks for taking the time to review my article, Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Badlands_Unlimited. You stated that it borders on notability, but has not crossed that threshold. I must politely disagree with you, however, and cite the additional references I included that have either profiled Badlands Unlimited or reviewed its publications, such as: Publisher's Weekly, LA Review of Books, Los Angeles Times, Washington Post, Vogue, NPR, Bookforum, The New Yorker, New York Observer, Frieze Magazine, and many other notable sources the document high-profile goings-on and people in the art scene. What would push Badlands Unlimited past the threshold of notability that you spoke of, in your opinion? From where I am situated, working in the art industry, Badlands Unlimited already has a lot of clout that extends outside of art publishing into the general publishing and e-book scene.

I do agree that there is a very editorial tone in the article I wrote, though; I will have to go through and see if I can't improve upon it by changing up the tone and language. Could you give me an example of a correction to the passage you quoted, which you considered too editorial?

"what seems to set Badlands Unlimited apart from many art house publishers is their emphasis on producing e-book-exclusive content for e-readers, rather than focusing on producing limited edition, ephemeral paper publications."

how about:

"what sets Badlands Unlimited apart from most art house publishers is their focus on art ebooks, rather than producing limited edition, ephemeral printed publications."?

Any help you can give me regarding getting my article up would be appreciated--I understand that the contemporary conceptual art scene is very insular, and that it is difficult to see the notability of certain institutions immersed in it, especially of current innovators in the field. However, it would be a comfort to know that the documentation of contemporary, not just traditional art has a place on Wikipedia.

Matthewyso (talk) 22:22, 3 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Matthewyso, as I said before, this article has borderline notability, but we'll get to that later. References should adhere to WP:CORPDEPTH, and the content of the Badlands article should reflect that coverage. You can't write about what sets Badlands Unlimited apart from other publishers if an independent source hasn't already done so. In this regard, the article is far too long in relation to the sources provided. Good rule of thumb: use an inline citation for every sentence. If you can't directly support the sentence, don't write it.


 * Speaking of style, in the example sentence ("what seems to set Badlands apart..."), I'm sensing a promotional tone -- in fact, I sense this tone all over the article, especially in the introduction's pull quote. It makes me think that the intended reader is a consumer or competitor of Badlands. Let the reader draw conclusions about how this company might be different from others. "Badlands Unlimited produces limited edition, ephemeral printed publications. [citation] "


 * Wikipedia has a searchable manual of style: WP:MOS, as well as some great resources for writing better articles.


 * My advice would be to blank your current submission and start over. I'll help you. I've created a user sandbox for us to work in: User:Matthewyso/sandbox2. To get started, I suggest you include as many citations as possible from reliable sources (WP:RS) that support notability and pop them up in the sandbox. Once they're up, I'll review them help you get started on a new draft. QuantifiedElf (talk) 15:54, 4 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hey QuantifiedElf--


 * Saw the sandbox you made to help me out with the article. Is this where I should reply regarding that? Or will you be notified if I edit or write in the sandbox you made for me to work on the proposed article in? Either way, thanks for the heads up on my talk page. I simplified and rewrote the gist of what comprised the article so far, hopefully you can help me with any language issues! Thanks!


 * 96.246.1.140 (talk) 22:47, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * --whoops, that was me!
 * Matthewyso (talk) 22:59, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hey Matthew. Nice work cleaning up the style. You can continue to correspond with me on my talk page, right here. You can also leave notes on the sandbox we've created together. I'll check both regularly to see your progress.


 * I did suggest that you start the article by listing all of your reliable sources (remember WP:RS?). But starting with the content is okay too. You can check out my revisions here. I've indicated where you need to include citations by inserting, (represented in the document as [citation needed] ). So, an example would be, "Badlands claims to have published the first art exhibition as interactive e-book, entitled How to Download a Boyfriend..


 * Once you've filled in all of the references we'll have an idea of what information can be included and what can't. The next step will be to review the references to see if Badlands Unlimited is really notable enough to be on Wikipedia.


 * Good luck. QuantifiedElf (talk) 18:00, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi! It's been awhile, I know. I've totally blanked on the coding for pages, so I'll have to re-learn. I added the references you said I should list in the sandbox you made for our use in determining where Badlands Unlimited falls in terms of notability. I'm not sure if I should be listing the references in a certain format, I think they were described in context, but the references do mention the various publications, websites and institutions that profile Badlands and its work.


 * Could you suggest a way to move forward from here? Sorry for being away from this for so long.
 * Matthewyso (talk) 20:14, 28 October 2013 (UTC)

Temporal networks
Dear QuantifiedElf,

I am also a new member, so first - thank you for your contribution.

You have just made a following comment: "I would like to approve this article, but the citations seem lacking. Some paragraphs and sections, like Physical proximity have no citations. I would personally want to see this improved before moving it to the main space." Actually, I cited (referred) the first-level title of those paragraphs where you need additional links, sources (N°3). For me it means that the whole part is linked to the given source, and any other links just complete that source. If this methodology is wrong in your point of view, I can agree with that - of course. But then it is also needed to put the very same source at the end of all the paragraphs, because they have the common origin.

What do you suggest, how to deal with it? Regards. Prince19911991 (talk) 10:56, 12 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Prince. Yes, I see how you've structured the citations now. On Wikipedia, especially at WP:AfC, we are always checking for verifiability. I think it's somewhat misleading for technical content to have only one citation presented above an entire section. And considering that you are presenting other references, like #5 and #9, it's best to clarify where you are deriving information for each paragraph.


 * There is a function within the citation parameter that allows you to use a references more than once. It works like this:
 * Temporal networks refer to a type of dynamical systems where the additional dimension compared to static networks is the time. As the mathematical representation of the network, a graph consists of a set of nodes and edges, where the later express the interaction between the nodes.
 * References


 * And it displays like this:
 * Temporal networks refer to a type of dynamical systems where the additional dimension compared to static networks is the time. As the mathematical representation of the network, a graph consists of a set of nodes and edges, where the later express the interaction between the nodes.
 * References


 * Can you clear up this issue and then I'll take another look? Thanks. QuantifiedElf (talk) 18:19, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Haven't heard from you for a while so I've declined the article at AfC. You can continue to work on the article and then resubmit when it's ready. QuantifiedElf (talk) 18:32, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

Steven Montgomery
Hi QuantifiedElf, Thanks for your feedback on my article! I've added a "Further Reading" section (or should I call it "Sources," or give it some other heading?) that lists periodicals and books with additional coverage. I've checked other random articles in the "American Ceramists" category, and many there have minimal references, so I hope this will help. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Steven_Montgomery FreePress48 (talk) 22:21, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
 * FreePress, it's best not to judge a newly submitted article to articles that already exist. Some articles have been sitting around forever without much review and probably shouldn't be there (at least in terms of Wikipedia's notability requirements). You should check out the basic notability requirements at WP:BIO. From the sources you've provided, I think Montgomery is almost there. The New York Times Fantasy Machines From Technology's Dark Side article is a good indicator of notability, but I'd like to see one or two more pieces like it. Try searching Google News Archives to see if you can't turn up anything else. The books you've provided don't do much for me because I don't have access to them and they aren't showing up in Google Books, so it's difficult to determine how reliable they are. QuantifiedElf (talk) 17:56, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

Will do -- thanks for the additional guidance! FreePress48 (talk) 21:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

AfC of PROS, Inc.
Hello. Thank you for taking the time to evaluate the article creation of PROS, Inc.. I wanted to verify that I understood your hesitations to approve the article so that I may make improvements to it so that it may be approved.

First, you'd like to see more 3rd party references. I had PROS referenced for basic information, so I can understand how that would be considered 1st-party references. I included NYSE, Business Wire, Reuters, and Seeking Alpha. Are these not classified as 3rd party? They are not affiliated with the business. Do I simply need to include more of these 3rd party references?

Second, you'd like to understand why the article would be relevant, correct? It is a NYSE business and works with many Fortune companies. I've noticed a number of articles on companies. Do I need to show more reason why it is significant? I found an article on Insider Monkey that discusses the foreseen growth/potential for the company: http://www.insidermonkey.com/blog/hedge-funds-are-betting-on-pros-holdings-inc-pro-116511/. Morningstar also projects growth for the company. Would these help with the relevancy?

For what it's worth, I wanted to disclose that I do not work for this company nor do I do business with it. I am trying to identify article gaps and noticed this since it is a Houston-based company and I am from Houston. -- domest icen ginerd 18:51, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
 * You should read over the notability criteria at WP:CORP. You'll also need to learn what a reliable sources is at WP:RS. The Business Wire is a press release, so no, it's not independent. The Seeking Alpha article was authored by "PRO" and has a disclosure at the top of the article. QuantifiedElf (talk) 19:02, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


 * There is still the Reuters article and things can be found on Google, Yahoo, etc. I suggested the insider monkey article. I am trying to identify what needs to be improved and am seeking your advice. I feel like I am just getting reasons why it does not work currently vs. what I am asking. Please advise. Thanks. -- domest icen ginerd 20:39, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


 * The Reuters reference listed on your article is a broken link, but I assume it was supposed to lead here: . Anyways, it doesn't help with notability. If you think there are better sources on Google and Yahoo, then you should find them and put them in the article. In my previous post I suggested that you review WP:CORP and WP:RS. I wasn't trying to dissuade you from pursuing this article, I'm simply trying to point you in the right direction. If you understand what makes a company notable and what a reliable source is, you'll understand what we're looking for at AfC and how you can improve your article. QuantifiedElf (talk) 16:01, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

WindowsWear
Hello QuantifiedElf,

Thank you for taking the time to review my WindowsWear article. I took your feedback into consideration and I updated the article using your advice. If I can improve the submission in any way so it will be moved into the article space please let me know.

Thank you again, MickeyMouse5349 MickeyMouse5349 (talk) 18:46, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Nice work! Your first round of revisions are definitely going in the right direction.


 * The original submission was highly promotional and didn't establish notability.
 * The current submission is less promotional (although it still needs work) and still doesn't establish notability.


 * So what else can you do? Well, the History, Function, and Awards sections have no references. Focus on supporting your information with inline citations. Your citations should be of reliable sources.


 * You're a good writer, but the style you're using for this article isn't right for an encyclopedia. It reads like a company brochure (albeit an educational and well-written one). Use short sentences, simple words, and facts that matter. Consider this selection: "Immediately after its creation, the company put into place a team of professional photographers, graphic designers, and web developers from around the world. The team includes Raul Tovar, Head of Photography." I don't think it's necessary to comment that the company put together a professional team... what company wouldn't? And it's irrelevant that they came from around the world. What's worse, this information isn't supported by any source, which means that anyone can delete it at any time. Rather than revising these sentences, I'd remove them completely, or possibly, "The company's team includes Raul Tovar, who is head of photography. Read through writing better articles and give it another pass. QuantifiedElf (talk) 23:33, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for your input. I updated the WindowsWear article per your suggestions. I fixed the language and added new citations. If there is anything else I can do please let me know. MickeyMouse5349 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 19:28, 20 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Hey there, Mickey, I've reviewed the work you've done on WindowsWear and have again declined the article for creation. You definitely improved the content, but I don't see the company as meeting notability requirements and think that it's WP:TOOSOON for WindowsWear to be on Wikipedia. Of course, if you'd like a second opinion you can re-submit the article for review. Cheers. QuantifiedElf (talk) 21:55, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Tom Adelstein
Hello QuantifiedElf,

I am new to Wikipedia, and I needed your advice on creating an article that was declined due to inadequate evidence on notability of the subject, Tom Adelstein.

There is plenty of material out there that I can use to support my claims, and I understand now that some of the references are not independent of the subject. Other than citing more independent sources, is there something else that I need to do to improve my submission?

Nedenhoffer (talk) 17:26, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
 * My only advice right now would be to eliminate any information that isn't supported by a reliable source. Incorporate more reliable sources. When you've done that, get back to me. QuantifiedElf (talk) 23:35, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Declining submission of http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Clicktopurchase
Hello,

This is in regard to your decision to decline my submission of the article, Clicktopurchase - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Clicktopurchase

Since originally writing the article, I have added further citations, including sources other than Property Week (which was confirmed by a previous reviewer not to be an "unbiased or poor source"), such as CoStar, which is another reliable and trustworthy source in commercial property media.

I have gone through all existing online sources and selected what I think are the most reliable sources of news relating to Clicktopurchase. I have made the article as unbiased and as objective as possible, by keeping the tone entirely factual. As mentioned before, Clicktopurchase is an actual online platform for the exchange of contracts, having been used by national and international firms, and is thus worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, I think, just as an article on eBay, for example, would be.

Therefore, I am at a loss as to what to do to ensure successful submission of the article.

Can you please suggest what else I can do?

Thank you for your help.

Neil Singer (talk) 08:18, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
 * He Neil, first let me say that you've done an excellent job writing a neutral article with an encyclopedic tone, well done.


 * Unfortunately, the fact that Clicktopurchase is used by national and international firms does not make it worthy of a Wikipedia presence, and the difference between this company and eBay is that if you do a Google News search for eBay, you'll get over 135,000 results including in-depth articles in reliable sources. The same search engine returns 0 results when you replace "eBay" for "Clicktopurchase". Not to mention that eBay is a massively popular Fortune 500 company. There is simply no comparing Clicktopurchase to eBay.


 * Clicktopurchase isn't notable right now because it doesn't meet the notability criteria for companies. See WP:CORP.


 * Since you know how to write in a neutral tone and how to format citations, why don't you consider finding another business or subject to write about? QuantifiedElf (talk) 23:48, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Talkback
Pol430  talk to me  18:56, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

AfC submission you declined
You recently declined Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Beorama for lack of inline citations. If you had paid attention to the article, you would have seen inline citations in the article, but was only missing a at the bottom to make the happy links show up. Please be more careful when reviewing AfC submissions. I have re-activated the AfC submission (by undoing your decline) and would appreciate it if you would take more care. Hasteur (talk) 18:59, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I declined the submission for notability, and I reviewed the article's source code to view the citations, of which there are only two. User:ChzzBot IV left the comment about missing inline citations, not me. It's okay, we all make mistakes. QuantifiedElf (talk) 20:44, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/5rooms.com
Hello QuantifiedElf,

Thank you for reviewing the article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/5rooms.com.

"I can see you've been working quite a bit on the 5rooms article, which I've recently declined at AfC. Let me know if you want some help. The article has some style issues, and I'm not sure notability is there yet."

Can you please help me to fix the style issues?

There is a notable reference from Yahoo news and also industry related media (magazines, newspapers) in South Africa.

Thank you for your help and guidance. Your help is much appreciated.

Pioneercpt (talk) 19:01, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi Pioneercpt - I don't really have time right now to fix the style issues myself, nor am I convinced that correcting the style issues would improve the chances of the article being approved for creation. I suggest you read up on WP:MOS and WP:CORP. QuantifiedElf (talk) 21:59, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Black Beauty Supply.
Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Black Beauty Supply. The article is supposed to be about The History of the black beauty supply. It differs from main stream beauty supply because of segregation. I did put it in there but did not say segregation. Do I need to add more? There isn't that much more known about the subject.

Terryakinspr (talk) 02:40, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Rather than creating a new article on Black Beauty Supply, I think you should consider developing a new section within Wikipedia's Beauty products article. The fact that there isn't much known about the subject suggests that it wouldn't be appropriate to have a standalone article about it. Check out WP:Referencing for beginners to get started. QuantifiedElf (talk) 22:04, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Voalte, Inc.
Hi Quantified Elf,

I'm new to Wikipedia and I'm trying to understand how to get my article accepted. I was modeling it off of Vocera's wiki page, which includes only references from its own website. Because my page was declined, I added only outside references that should qualify Voalte as a notable company. Can you take another look and let me know what I need to fix in order to publish the page?

Thanks again for your help, Caroline — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cearly (talk • contribs) 13:43, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Give me a few days to check out this article and maybe make some improvements. It looks we might be able to establish notability, in which case I would suggest a hefty copy edit before publication. QuantifiedElf (talk) 22:07, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry I never got back to you about your article at AfC, it slipped my mind. I've just finished reviewing and accepting your article. You did some really exceptional work bringing the article up to Wikipedia's standards and proving notability. Nice work! QuantifiedElf (talk) 20:45, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi Quantified Elf! Thank you for accepting my article. I appreciate the help. Have a great night and thanks for the baklava! Cearly (talk) 20:52, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!
Dear QuantifiedElf,

Thanks for reviewing the entry on Ben Sutton: Articles for creation/Ben Sutton.

We are very new to Wikipedia so would like your guidance on how to improve our submission. We tried to present biographical information but apparently it seems to Wikipedia to be promotional/advertising. Can you help clarify that and provide specific recommendations on how we can fix it? We did link to numerous articles that the information came from so could use advice on that as well. Please let me know what advice you have.

Thanks College_Sports_Fan

College Sports Fan (talk) 13:39, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

About my recent submission
Hi!

I'm a fairly new user to Wikipedia. I've lurked and made some small edits, but this was the first page I made. It was originally rejected, so I talked to the Editor that evaluated my work, and he gave me tips and assistance in bringing my page up to his standards. Obviously, though, different people want different things, and I was hoping you'd be able to help me bring the article up to your standards, and hopefully, Wikipedia's publishing standards?

The article in question is at AfC/TouchCopy

Thanks,

John — Preceding unsigned comment added by John R.V.D. (talk • contribs) 08:57, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi John. Thanks for your message and I definitely respect your perseverance in navigating the AfC environment. There are a few issues with your submission, and my primary concern was that it read like an advertisement. When you write, "According to the application's website" and "TouchCopy received overall positive reviews," I get the feeling that the intention of the article is to impress potential customers rather than inform consumers and everyday Wikipedia readers. It's my personal opinion, but I don't think user ratings are relevant enough to be included in a Wikipedia article. In fact, I don't see much weight in any of the information in the Reception section. You've done an adequate job of being neutral in this section, but I still feel that, based on the actual reviews, you are still leaning to present this product as being more positively received than it actually has been.


 * In addition to the advertisement issues, I'm not sure this subject meets the notability requirements at WP:CORP. The passing mentions in borderline reliable sources don't seem to justify an article of this length, and I think it just might be too soon for an article on this app. I think that if you tried to beef up the reliable sources and limited your content to what you have in the introduction, the article MIGHT be accepted as a stub. QuantifiedElf (talk) 22:20, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi!

Thanks for the reply. I see your point on the first quoted text, I'll reword that one. As for the reviews, I was following a few other software pages as template for what I added to the page, since the intended purpose was to fix "Comparison of iPod managers". I noticed it was in disrepair, so I thought I'd go in, add some missing software pages, update others, and see if it stands the test of time. TouchCopy is fairly old in the business, but I noticed it was missing, so I thought I'd make its page first. I didn't expect the review process to be quite so harsh, but then again, that's probably a good thing, stops any junk being added. The review section was modelled after TuneUp Utilities' page, since TuneUp Media was another program I was thinking of making a page for. Is it not somehow following Wikipedia regulations?

I could try and find more reviews, but I think that's the problem with them, they tend to be overblown in one direction or the other, and I didn't manage to find any more from reasonably well known websites at the time of writing.

Well, I'll go back to the drawing board, and try and make this more presentable and appealing as a Wikipedia article.

Thank you for your help.

Kind regards,

John — Preceding unsigned comment added by John R.V.D. (talk • contribs) 13:03, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

contributing historic sites article
Hi QuantifiedElf -- I was glad to see your note with appreciation of some of my historic site articles, which you posted at wt:HSITES. Sorry i didn't see it promptly and havent gotten back to you. Do let's chat. -- do ncr  am  17:56, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Are you interested in doing articles on U.S. NRHP-listed places? If so there is a fair amount of info at wp:NRHPhelp which I and others put together.  Or i would be happy to chat you through the process i use, if you would pic a redlink NRHP-listed place, anywhere indexed from List of RHPs.  Or are you interested in historic sites in another country? -- do  ncr  am  22:47, 26 August 2013 (UTC)

HostDime review
Hi! I recently submitted an article for review. It appears that you edited the last version and commented that the company in question didn't have enough notoriety. I've made some edits and resubmitted, but I'd like to point out that not only is this a very large company, they were also caught selling hosting space to Syria, which was/is a pretty big issue. It seems both pretty notorious and like something that people would want to know about when choosing companies.

If you have any more feedback, I'd appreciate it.

Thanks! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/HostDime.com_Inc. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bridbeck (talk • contribs) 16:47, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

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