User talk:Quinterochelsea/sandbox

I will be focusing my findings for the Ground Water Ambient Assessment article

Chelsea, great job keeping your outline neutral. I was impressed to learn about the important topics you brought up, and how some of these projects began. I think the second paragraph discusses the subject more than the starting paragraph, maybe you can include what you will be talking about in the first paragraph so you can make it a leading paragraph. I would suggest to discuss in detail what some of the projects are and their link to the subject. That way the reader can follow along. I think an improvement to your outline would be to add more information, with detailed coverage on the topic and subtopics. In your references, I saw that you have an article on pharmaceuticals. Perhaps you should connect this article to your wikipedia page for more coverage.

In all, seems like a great topic. The information you already have is great you just need to elaborate on some parts and add detail. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adriana.a41 (talk • contribs) 05:18, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review Response: Adriana, thank you for taking the time to view my outline and feedback on the current content. I will be adding visual element and more detail to the paragraphs, thank you! Quinterochelsea (talk) 20:09, 17 April 2019 (UTC) Chelsea