User talk:QuintinK/sandbox

1. You need a space between Alice Sheldon and (aka James Tiptree) in the first sentence

2. You should italicize the title of the book

3. You have cited a lot of opinions from the blog post. You say things like "awkward and disjointed," "major flaw," "disappointing and cheesy," "best overall," etc. While I think your analysis is great for a book review and would certainly guide people interested in reading the book, I don't know if your subjective statements fit perfectly in an encyclopedia article. I think maybe you could try to be more neutral, and simply state the plot and context of the stories. I'm sure your judgments are valid and true for you, but they might not hold true for everyone.

Kmcveety (talk) 18:28, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

I got the first two. On the last one: I just need to cut a bit more from the review. I am just trying to figure out the right way to cut things. Or maybe I was being lazy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by QuintinK (talk • contribs) 02:27, 2 December 2013 (UTC)