User talk:Qwertygirl123/Presentence investigation report

Peer-Review
Hello, I see the title for your article is Presentence investigation report, However, I did my review on your information about Germany. This is what I could access. You did a great job by the way, the visuals and crisp transitions helped me to understand your work. The only critique I have is: the ending for your introduction paragraph. You speak about "putting yourself into someone else's shoes" which is fine. I understand what you are talking about. There is more to Germany than The Red Scare and the Holocaust. Maybe conveying this in a different way can serve the same purpose in a different fashion (no pun intended)? You're off to a great start and I'm not sure how those few sentences and Wikipedia's rules mix. Also, at a later date think about adding a categories box to top it all off.

I wish you all the best! Jalapinata (talk)