User talk:R.SchmidtPatrick

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Hello, R.SchmidtPatrick, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Review for "Lake Butte des Morts" page additions
Hi R.SchmidtPatrick – I’ve taken a look through your Wikipedia article on Big Lake Butte des Morts, and have some suggestions for you to consider as you wrap up your assignment. These suggestions were based on the versions of your article here and here.


 * You’ve done a good job of reorganizing the pre-existing information from the old Wikipedia page on this lake into new categories. However, some of the new categories have little or no information in them.
 * Generally, you’ve included lots of links to other Wikipedia pages. This is a really helpful contribution, because it increases cross-referencing and helps readers easily find definitions and more information. Keep including these links as you add more text!
 * You’ve added a lot of useful, interesting data to the infobox for the lake.
 * It looks like the “Wildlife” and “Natural Wildlife” sections are duplicates of one another, so one of the two could be deleted.
 * There are a number of links to image files towards the end of your article, but they aren’t displaying properly. If you’re able to fix these links that would be great – it looks like there’s lots of useful information in the figures!

I hope the above is helpful as you wrap up your Wikipedia assignment. Once you’ve added in more of your text on Big Lake Butte des Morts, please let me know if you’d like me to take a look at your article again. I’d be happy to do so. JoGDelta (talk) 01:52, 3 December 2020 (UTC)