User talk:R2p55/sandbox

Intertwine Evaluation
Peer Review Teannw1: Maybe simplify the regulation more to how it directly impacts Kpop (without making inferences on your own) and a hyperlink to K-pop Teannw1 (talk) 20:25, 17 March 2018 (UTC)

I think the article seems to hold a neutral point of view. I think a cool thing to add would be hyperlinks to "South Korea Fair Trade Commission (KFTC)" and maybe other laws you mentioned if they have a website/Wikipedia article linked to them. Also, I think more citations can strengthen your article. Otherwise, great progress! Mary Mijares (talk) 20:26, 17 March 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps a section on the opinions of people in the industry over the new regulations? Or examples of how these people have been affected by them? Aharriot96 (talk) 20:29, 17 March 2018 (UTC)