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First sentence "Louise Nicholson (Born 1st May 1954) was a British journalist, historian and lecturer ..." should be "Louise Nicholson (born 1 May 1954) is a British journalist, historian and lecturer, a specialist in ..."

There needs to be a lot of work on the referencing. The Alchetron site doesn't count as a reliable source.

https://www.corfuliteraryfestival.com/speakers has some factual information about Nicholson. But it is not a strong reference - probably Nicholson herself supplied the text.

https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=OfaIEAAAQBAJ&pg=PT13 has some information also. The 2010 award from the National Association of Professional Women (of America) is something that might be verifiable. The Wikipedia article

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_Association_of_Professional_Women

is confusing, however. The first link above says 2011 and award from the IAW.

https://www.outlookindia.com/magazine/story/for-the-deprived-of-the-earth-this-trust-offers-a-patch-of-life/211356 gives something about her activities in India.

While there is plenty to say about Louise Nicholson, clearly, there are big issues with verifiability from independent sources, as Wikipedia requires.

I have tracked down an elder brother George Howard Joseph Nicholson, born 1936, involved with the British Olympic Association. But otherwise there is little I can see of personal information. Charles Matthews (talk) 10:42, 17 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Can i have some extra feedback on what to do before i submit this please i want this to achieve high marks. Also can i have help to fix the reference, i duplicated the same reference 7 times. I know i still have to do some reference through the text but i need overall feedback thank you.
 * RBorokini14 (talk) 21:54, 25 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Actually, what you are doing there with references to Nicholas Wapshott is contrary to a Wikipedia guideline: WP:CIRCULAR. You should remove most of the text, since the link to the Wapshott article is available. You should use the Who's Who reference for facts about Wapshott.


 * To reuse that reference, make it Then in other places you only need to reuse the reference.


 * You have work to do in placing the references into the text, and taking [edit] out of the headings. Charles Matthews (talk) 08:49, 26 April 2023 (UTC)