User talk:RColeman00/sandbox

Is there more to this wikipedia page that you're expanding on? I'd like to see the positives and negatives that people have to say about it(how it's not actually bad for you). I'd also like to see a change in time over the years and how marijuana has effected people differently. You might be able to add in a paragraph about laced marijuana and how that can affect people. Other than those fews things I like the description of the effects you have listed and you have a source to back it up.HarrisonFranken (talk) 12:38, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback - Tim
While short as of right now, the current text is very informative. It does a very good job of summarizing major points, making it a good paragraph to use as an introduction. Use of hyperlinks is correct and plentiful, and is helpful for more niche words. While I'm sure that they're not there as of right now b/c it's a rough draft, more citations are needed. Overall, a good starting point. Pinyayta (talk) 19:16, 24 October 2018 (UTC)