User talk:RIAwiki02/Race and health

Peer Review

 * 1) Your article provides facts in an unbiased manner and in your own words.
 * 2) I would suggest using different sources for 2 and 3 since the studies took place in New Zealand and Italy and this class focuses on racial disparities in the US. The first source is good.
 * 3) Try summarizing multiple articles in your own words before writing down the edits you want to make. I find that it makes it easier to not plagiarize and also provide a good summary of the topic. Also, it looks like you are adding on to the controversy section, but based on your information and sources, I think it would better fit in the Racial Health disparities section. Everlark13 (talk) 14:59, 1 April 2024 (UTC)