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Italian Army ranks
Is this your lead? Where does the information come from? I don't see it in the article itself. If you want to use it, provide your sources. You should delete the first paragraph because it's too general.

Also, the WP article says that the ranks are worn on epaulets rather than on sleeves. Your lead says something different.

Revise the draft according to the instructions as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:49, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I see you revised and added the lead. It still could use some minor fixes (no colon after "include" and change "he" to "he or she" - surely the Italian military accepts women?), but it's an improvement to the article. You're done with this assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 00:30, 1 May 2018 (UTC)