User talk:RIP Papa Franku 2011-2017/sandbox/ManChild sandbox

Adding Sources
I wasn't sure which of your sandboxes you're using for this assignment, so I'm responding to both. This submission has several problems. One, the sources aren't from the library but rather from the artist himself. Two, I'm not sure if the text is from the sources or from the WP article. You should include both side by side and clearly mark each part with headings. Post a revision within a week if you want to continue working on this article. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:16, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead
I assume you're hoping to add a lead to this article. I recommend that you find another article for this assignment. This article is a mess, and a missing lead is the least of its problems. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:23, 1 April 2018 (UTC)