User talk:RPolls/Women in Guyana

Overall impressions - Jordyn Ederer's peer review
I really really liked reading your contributions to the article! Whenever I was editing an existing article for mine, I think I struggled with strengthening the work that was already there, but you did such a great job of elevating the sections that you didn’t make from scratch, and I think it added another dimension of improvement to the article as a whole! Your strengths were definitely your diction, word choice, and organization. I especially liked your contributions to the research section; the sentence about the ‘historical displacement and stereotypical frameworks’ embedded into the history of women’s representation in Guyana was enlightening, and really helped me understand the circumstances that facilitated the underrepresentation of women in the public spheres. In terms of improvement, I think my only suggestion would be to consider adding a concluding section about the current state of women’s representation in Guyana, or just an overview of how women’s social status has changed over time; I know you talked about it a lot in each section, but having it all condensed in one place that brings it into modern context might be helpful too! Aside from that suggestion, I feel like your article was pretty complete! I can’t wait to read it once it’s all tied in with the original work, I think your edits and contributions are really powerful!

Jordynederer (talk) 04:59, 1 April 2023 (UTC)