User talk:RS92194/sandbox

Hello, RS92194! There's two things that stand out to me about your article. The first is that you have some opportunities for internal links-- "revolution of October 1917," for example, could just be linked to Russian Revolution. The second is that some of your writing is veering off the neutral standard. "Very much embellished," is one that could be replaced with something like "Historians have found the description of Stalin's Soviet career inaccurate" with a link to where you read that. Same goes for "One could argue that the attention from his growing cult started to grow on Stalin." I'd just eliminate that line and allow the lines after it to make that point for you. SumCall (talk) 14:37, 8 April 2018 (UTC)