User talk:RS9999

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 8)
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Otterathome (talk) 21:00, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Around the Corner with John McGivern has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Around the Corner with John McGivern. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 05:04, 12 August 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Around the Corner with John McGivern (August 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 12 August 2017 (UTC)

Recent edit to John Gurda
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that you made a change to an article, John Gurda, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you! Materialscientist (talk) 06:51, 12 August 2017 (UTC)

Wikipedia and copyright
Hello RS9999, and welcome to Wikipedia. All or some of your addition(s) to Concussions in American football have been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. While we appreciate your contributing to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from your sources to avoid copyright or plagiarism issues here.


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Hi:

Concussions in Football  is not the same as Concussions in NFL Football,   Concussions in Football is all football, youth, high school, semi pro,  NFL, etc

Question: All MY work was deleted,  how do I get it back to reword some of it? or is gone for good?

However, if the editor is going to disallow content... then I would not exert any additional effort

About 50% was reworded in my own words or use  of a single copied sentence,  yet it was deleted...  Is there a general sense that you did not like the changes.

Most of the deaths are attributed to Head injuries. Not wearing appropriate head gear lead to 19 deaths in 1905.

Example:

RS9999 (talk) 00:35, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Copyright infringement is treated seriously here. To retain your copies and then revise them would have the effect of rendering the product as legally a derivative and so a further infringement. It is necessary to rewrite in your own words before posting them here, we can not copy source text then revise it unless that source text has a compatible free license. We all agreed to not infringe by clicking "Save changes": see the line immediately above that button where it says "By saving changes, you agree to the Terms of Use, ..." Please take the time to understand the pages Diannaa has linked to above. LeadSongDog  come howl!  17:21, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

August 2017
Your addition to Chronic traumatic encephalopathy, Draft:Around the Corner with John McGivern, and Concussion have been removed, as it appears you added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images&mdash;you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. ''This is your final warning. Further copyright violations will result in you being blocked from editing. Also, please review WP:MEDRS for acceptable sourcing for medical articles.'' — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 00:11, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

What are you doing? deleting all this work?

This was all my own words?

If I copy a line and then reword the line in WIKI site is this what you are objecting to?

RS9999 (talk) 00:19, 16 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The copyright violations were reported by a bot and assessed by myself. Here is a link to one of the bot reports. Click on the "iThenticate report" link to view the overlap. There's been four such bot reports in the last two days, and additional copyright violations were found manually by myself. Almost everything you have added since you arrived has been copied from elsewhere online. Please don't do it any more or I will block you from editing. — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 01:15, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Around the Corner with John McGivern (September 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eddie891 was:

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Eddie891 Talk Work 00:44, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Around the Corner with John McGivern (February 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SshibumXZ was:

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Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 20:25, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Around the Corner with John McGivern


Hello, RS9999. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Around the Corner with John McGivern".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Hhkohh (talk) 23:40, 19 August 2018 (UTC)