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Your submission at Articles for creation: Travis D. Frain (February 5)
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microbiology Marcus (petri dish·growths) 21:32, 5 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Good point about the puffery- I hadn't realised it was a press release! I'll see if anyone else has reported on this, and if not then I will edit it out.
 * As for the other two points you've made, in the sixth line of the article I referenced it says "Mr Frain, of Darwen, ...", is this not good enough? I saw this other article also that says: "Darwen born and bred, Travis had just turned...": https://ormskirk.qlocal.co.uk/ormskirk/news_list/Ormskirk_honoured_by_the_King-55067815.htm Would it be better if I referenced this one instead?
 * And for the second point - I don't have a date of birth for Travis, but I figured that given the OBE news reported he was 25yrs old in Jan. 2024 and the terror attack news reported he was 19yrs old in March 2017, when you do the maths that must place his birthday as somewhere between Jan-Mar. 1998 - is that not sufficient? Do I need to find his exact date of birth and cite this? I was using this page as a guide due to their similar work and achievements and noticed that they do not have an exact date of birth, just a year, so I thought it would be okay?: Nooralhaq Nasimi
 * Let me know what you think. RUP2021 (talk) 10:08, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:05, 7 July 2024 (UTC)