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USS Princeton (1843) book
Ariticle Citation- Pearson, L. (1966). Technology and Culture: The John Hopkins University Press. 0040165X.

This book is vol. 7 of 47 volumes, that goes in greater detail of the USS Princeton of 1843. It goes in depth about the gun that exploded on board that initially caused the tragedy. It also discusses when and how the boat was made and who created it.This book has great info for any project on the USS Princeton sailing vessel of 1843.RYANMURR (talk) 03:58, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

Maersk
He Ryan you apa citation style of your sources are good maybe you should add more if you can find more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nickgutierrez71 (talk • contribs) 19:16, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

Maersk
Hey Ryan you apa citation style of your sources are good maybe you should add more if you can find more.

I don't know what section headers are but I don't think you have them, but you do have good breaks between paragraphs it makes your story essier to read, you need to put in internal links and inline citation format. I would try to show you how to do those things but I don't even know how to do that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nickgutierrez71 (talk • contribs) 19:24, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

You have good reliable sources it makes your topic stand out more because you have dates and figures that it good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nickgutierrez71 (talk • contribs) 19:27, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

Maersk
Hey Ryan you apa citation style of your sources are good maybe you should add more if you can find more.

I don't know what section headers are but I don't think you have them, but you do have good breaks between paragraphs it makes your story essier to read, you need to put in internal links and inline citation format. I would try to show you how to do those things but I don't even know how to do that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nickgutierrez71 (talk • contribs) 19:24, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

You have good reliable sources it makes your topic stand out more because you have dates and figures that it good. You have three news paper articles that you use which is good maybe try and get a textbook on the topic or maybe a magazine.

But your article looks good. Just put in the internal links and inline citation format and your good.