User talk:Ra5en/Cao Yu/Reuentahl404 Peer Review

Hi, I really like your introduction so far. It is very detailed and to me as you have well-introduced Cao Yu and given a really clear impression of Cao Yu himself. I also think you have done pretty well in such a short paragraph as I think you have already given all the necessary information. However, I do have two suggestions, first of all you may try to add the Chinese version (characters) of Cao Yu's name in this paragraph which would give a much clearer impression for the readers. Secondly, I think maybe this paragraph can be further shortened, as I have though a way like, you can take the part of the influence of western literature to Cao Yu's work out of this paragraph and create a new part to further introduce the influence. Since you've also mentioned Eugene O'Neill's works' influence to his work, I think trying to introduce more about this topic would be fairly interesting but it also need more work as well. Overall, great job!Reuentahl404 (talk) 02:32, 30 October 2020 (UTC)